http://elder-bonnie.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] elder-bonnie.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] jd_ficathon2011-10-11 04:17 am

Fic: Seeing is Believing

Title: Seeing is Believing
Author: [livejournal.com profile] elder_bonnie
Summary: Daniel surprises Jack with a visit to DC. But something is wrong.
Word Count: Just over 5,500
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: No profit is being made from this – except maybe some nice comments :)
Written For: [livejournal.com profile] quietbang
Prompt:
Requirement 1: Post-series, Daniel goes to DC after an injury
Requirement 2: Established relationship
Optional request: Hurt/Comfort
Restriction 1: No unhappy ending
Restriction 2: No wussy!Daniel

Notes: Not beta-ed, so all mistakes are mine! I thought there was a lot that could be done with this amazing prompt, but I never do as well with relationship-centered fic as I do with action-based stories. Nevertheless, it was a fantastic exercise, and I tried my best to make it enjoyable and what you asked for! :) Please forgive the random turns it takes from time to time, specifically near the end…(Any constructive criticism on how to write a stronger relationship-centered fic in the comments would be very much appreciated!!! And thanks for reading.)

Seeing is Believing

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