Ah, I love the description of Daniel's look as interpreted by Jack. And the moment when Jack tries to think to Daniel about zatting.
The precise way you create the imagery and situation on that planet works very well. The stretch of that moment when Jack confronts Daniel about recollection is wonderful. Beautiful too how Jack reads the patterns exhibited by Daniels movements and how Siler and others are reflected in that. The way Daniel's subjective recognition shifts at the end is very fine.
I can't help but want more, which is a reflection of just how good this is. :)
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Date: 2009-10-13 09:59 pm (UTC)The precise way you create the imagery and situation on that planet works very well. The stretch of that moment when Jack confronts Daniel about recollection is wonderful. Beautiful too how Jack reads the patterns exhibited by Daniels movements and how Siler and others are reflected in that. The way Daniel's subjective recognition shifts at the end is very fine.
I can't help but want more, which is a reflection of just how good this is. :)