I love the jailbait line too, and I love how cognizant the fic is of Daniel's recently amnesiac state, and the Jon-Jack byplay is so much fun. Jack's thank-you at the end has an achey resonance, because he must know that Jon loves Daniel just as much as he does (and I suspect Jon's pushing Jack for Daniel's sake as much as Jack's) ... but the fic makes me believe that Jon's fully engaged in his life and pretty happy on his path, so I feel like I can be happy for both of them. Yay! :-D
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Date: 2014-08-24 01:51 am (UTC)